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Let’s start with a confession: Until it became the most requested film here at Story24, I had never seen Before Sunrise. I never had any intention of seeing it. It felt a little too close to home.
Before Sunrise premiered five years after my own long European misadventure, and with Ethan Hawke being near to five years younger than I am, the whole idea felt an awful lot like looking into a mirror — and that was the last thing I wanted to do.
It’s not that I didn’t enjoy those times. As difficult and as ugly and occasionally violent as things sometimes got, I’ve always held those years close as precious and golden. I didn’t want my own memories tainted by someone else’s fantasies. But what is it that Jesse says?
Maybe it’s because I was young. Everyone thinks the world was better when they were young. But there was something about being lost and aimless in Europe before cellphones and apps and debit cards. We stashed our traveler’s checks in the bottoms of our packs and we slept on our packs so they wouldn’t get stolen. We hiked and hitchhiked with no idea where we would end up at the end of the day, catching rides on tractors and sleeping under bridges and in caves. We tore out pages from our outdated Let’s Go guides and shared them with passing new friends headed to where we’d already been. Maps were made of paper and so were books, and we always carried at least one of each.
And so that first scene on the train with Jesse and Céline almost took my breath away. How many times had I lived that moment? Me with the Le Carré I’d picked up at that English-language newsstand in the south of France, or that first Murakami I discovered at the old bookshop on Charing Cross Road — or Tom McGuane, how did it take traveling halfway around the world to find out about that homegrown Bushwhacked Piano?
I remember one rainy afternoon in Dublin, reading Joseph Campbell’s Masks of God in a damp hostel lobby. Uta from Hamburg wrote the text of Desiderata into the margins of my book, the ink bleeding from her pen onto the moist paper. It still has a place on my bookshelf today, dry now, bent from all the miles.
Was Uta my Céline? I promised to meet her in Hamburg but never did. Or was it Anna from Brussels in Naples? Or Pauline from P.E.I. in London, walking hand-in-hand through Hyde Park after midnight?
Yes, Pauline. It’s always Pauline, it’s always London.
My other thought watching Before Sunrise for the first time is this: What were you people thinking, asking me to analyze the structure of this movie? This feels like some sadistic challenge. I'm really not in the mood.
I could put a structure onto this if I really tried. I could find an inciting incident and maybe some turning points and an act break or two. I could call the countdown to Jesse’s flight or Céline’s morning train a ticking clock. We could consider the will-they/won’t-they tension of whether they’ll ever have sex. But all that seems beside the point.
INT. TRAIN LOUNGE CAR — DAY
[...]
Celine
Who's going to want to watch this?
Jesse
Think about it like this. Why is it that a dog sleeping in the sun is so beautiful — you know, it is, it's beautiful — but a guy standing at a bank machine trying to take some money out looks like a complete moron?
Celine
So it's like a National Geographic program, but on people.
Jesse
Yeah. What do you think?
Celine
I can see it. Like 24 boring hours — sorry — and like a 3-minute sex scene where he falls asleep right after, no?
Jesse
Yeah, you know, I mean, that would be a great episode. People would talk about that episode.
This is a film where dialogue and conversation is structure. We watch because we’re interested in the characters and what they have to say to each other, not because they’re trying to pull off a heist or stop a bomb or solve a murder. This is low-stakes stuff. But it’s also relatable stuff — not just to me because of the time and place, but to anyone who’s ever met someone they liked.
There are moments that we can think of as plot: There’s Céline's decision to join Jesse in Vienna. There’s the first kiss at the Prater. There’s the first fight, interrupted, and the sex, implied. And there’s that last-minute change of heart, the agreement to meet again.
But this is also just a leisurely, picturesque stroll with a pair of decent, well-intentioned people who are finding their way in the world.
Even without any plot to speak of, there are a number of highly memorable moments. The scene in the record store listening booth would be a standout in any romantic story, the two standing silently side by side, taking turns looking at one another. I also loved when Céline talks about finding God in the spaces between people, and then we cut to the café, table to table, with the camera centering that space in every conversation. And who could forget the funny Austrians — is that an oxymoron?
Well, I guess Jesse and Céline could forget them.
They had something else in mind.
EXT. AMUSEMENT PARK — SUNSET
They are in the huge old Ferris wheel in the Prater amusement park. They have a large box to themselves and walk around in it looking at the various views.
Jesse
This is gorgeous.
Celine
Yeah. This is beautiful.
Jesse
We got, uh, we got the sunset here. We got the ferris wheel. Seems like um ... this would be a ...
Celine
What?
Jesse
Uh ... you know ... uh ...
Celine
Are you trying to say you want to kiss me?
He nods. They kiss.
The author, ca. 1989.
Her name wasn’t Krystal. Her name was Karen.
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